Dirty Blue tries something new - NSFW

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jjeans
10/19/12 2:16:19PM
Tried something new.... Had inspiration from "someone" on the PG. But I attempted to write some erotica.... Please give me some criticisms (if your ballsy enough on the thread if not via PM) constructive or abusive. Some form of feedback is better than nothing....

Edited by CC: Just ask Dirty Blue to PM you the link if you want to check this out. The site he linked to has pornographic ads and we can't allow that here. Thanks!
Shawn91111
10/19/12 2:24:39PM
uhh not sure you can link to porn sites or ads that have hardcore porn in them. Thats against site rules
jjeans
10/19/12 2:28:15PM

Posted by Shawn91111

uhh not sure you can link to porn sites or ads that have hardcore porn in them. Thats against site rules



No worries

before deletion
kopower
10/19/12 2:39:33PM
I was reading it at work and had to stop because a bulge was forming from my nether region.

Dirty Blue truly living up to his name
prophecy033
10/19/12 2:47:48PM
Bubbles
10/19/12 3:37:34PM
Too long to read right now...definitely looks like a bedtime story
Poor_Franklin
10/19/12 5:20:34PM
if you are writing erotica, you don't even need to ask. Just send me the PM.
jjeans
10/19/12 5:55:24PM
Thanks for the support guys... I hope it lives up to the hype
SpiderSilva
10/19/12 7:50:23PM
Wrink pRease
shaneTpain
10/19/12 9:13:36PM
hahahah Dirty Blue as controversial as ever
emfleek
10/19/12 9:43:58PM
Wait. You wrote this from a woman's perspective??

kopower
10/19/12 10:46:58PM
Very impressive Jay. There were a few typos here and there, but for the most part, it was a very descriptive, and well thought out story. Especially for someone without a background in writing (I'm assuming). I'm sure a certain female member of the playground will be pleased, in more ways than one
hotrodttt
10/20/12 3:14:14AM
pm please
Bubbles
10/20/12 5:03:12AM

Posted by hotrodttt

pm please


I think you should write one one too...you already have the groundwork started for an epic tale. Just need to go into more detail
shaneTpain
10/20/12 1:45:12PM
Project Mayhem loves it some hardcore porno literature Our camp got two smut authors. How much yours have?! Yo JJ! May i suggest you call your next one 50 Shades of Dirty Blue
jjeans
10/20/12 1:52:02PM

Posted by shaneTpain

Project Mayhem loves it some hardcore porno literature Our camp got two smut authors. How much yours have?! Yo JJ! May i suggest you call your next one 50 Shades of Dirty Blue



Oh my god.

You win. It'll be named that!!!!
Poor_Franklin
10/20/12 3:15:16PM

Posted by jjeans


Posted by shaneTpain

Project Mayhem loves it some hardcore porno literature Our camp got two smut authors. How much yours have?! Yo JJ! May i suggest you call your next one 50 Shades of Dirty Blue



Oh my god.

You win. It'll be named that!!!!



50 Shades of Jay
DancingDoll
10/20/12 5:55:36PM
See, I knew I could be a positive influence around here...

Congrats on your very first story, Jay! You've already had 1,172 views on your story... nicely done!
Bubbles
10/21/12 2:08:45AM

Posted by DancingDoll
Congrats on your very first story, Jay! You've already had 1,172 views on your story... nicely done!


Shane's responsible for 500 of those
prophecy033
10/21/12 3:31:01AM

Posted by Bubbles


Posted by DancingDoll
Congrats on your very first story, Jay! You've already had 1,172 views on your story... nicely done!


Shane's responsible for 500 of those

ncordless
10/21/12 3:49:47AM
I fapped.
jjeans
10/21/12 12:33:44PM
Thanks everyone for the support

Will do it from a male perspective next time, will look harder at my typos, will name a story after PF and Shane. You guys are awesome!

Sorry to scar you prophecy

Any other tips would be accepted, except tips from king smasher
emfleek
10/21/12 2:05:30PM
If you got paid for this, I need to know. I'll quit my fucking job and take up jerkalism.
187
10/21/12 2:10:29PM
so, i heard someone was giving out free smut in this thread.
DancingDoll
10/21/12 2:48:25PM

Posted by emfleek

If you got paid for this, I need to know. I'll quit my fucking job and take up jerkalism.



There's an erotica author named Selena Kitt that makes $20,000+ a month on erotica e-books and publishing.

That's definitely not the norm, but gives you an idea of what keeps sex writers motivated in the biz.

prophecy033
10/21/12 3:19:09PM

Posted by DancingDoll


Posted by emfleek

If you got paid for this, I need to know. I'll quit my fucking job and take up jerkalism.



There's an erotica author named Selena Kitt that makes $20,000+ a month on erotica e-books and publishing.

That's definitely not the norm, but gives you an idea of what keeps sex writers motivated in the biz.


you mean on the job experiance isn't motivation enough